Feedback on my product video before it's done

Hey, IH!
We're preparing for another Product Hunt day at OneBar, and I'm working on a video. I'm not a pro editor, but I've learned some basic skills and put together a draft.
It's a bit hard for me to judge the "viewability" of it, because I've watched it some 100 times already, and my eye is not clear anymore.

I'd appreciate any feedback, before it's too late to cut something out, change timings, messages, etc :)

P.S. the last-third of it is mostly not done yet, I need some cool graphics there.

https://youtu.be/ZTmUKsMGFSs