Feedback on no-code tool landing page
Hello IH!
I'm working on Biew, which is a simple website builder that uses Goole Sheets as the data source.
I'm planning on making a redesign, so I would love some feedback on the landing page: https://getbiew.com/
I would like to now if the copy is clear and if you can get an idea about what you can build with it.
Hey @lash
I love the idea behind the website. Superb!
However, from a copywriter's point of view, I don't have any reason to take your offer over others.
I'll suggest a change to the headline then a subheading to make it a compelling offer.
I'll add logos of companies that have perhaps tried the software.
Put forwards the benefits (not features)
Show how traditional landing page builder are messing you up and show why Biew is a better option in terms of page speed, optimization and lots.
I'll add 3-5 testimonials from pervious beta testers
I'll wrap it up with a call to action that makes it super easy to give it a try.
I'll remove the pricing totally as it causes a drop in conversions. Instead, offer a free 7,14, or 30 day trial.
That's what I'll do if I'm to rewrite your landing page.
Shoot me a DM on twitter or send me a mail if you'd like to help you out or you can do it yourself if you follow the process I outlined.
Best,
Joseph.
Hi! I tried Biew before and love it!
I think I’m not moving forward because it’s still a big gap between a workable #nocode solution. I often compare #nocode tools like Spreadsimple, Pory, Liist etc
I believe Biew will be a strong product if you allow more UI/ UX customization, also I think the price point is slightly high compare to existing alternatives.
Hey!
What's working: Clearly listing features, pricing. Easily seeing how it may be useful for some specific end users: restauranters,
What you could consider adding/ changing: maybe having some of the info from the video as stills on the website. The video really helped me understand the purpose/ benefit of using the website, yet I normally wouldn't have clicked on a video..
All the best :)
Thank you for the advice! I agree not everyone would click on the video, will definitely take it into account for the redesign.
Hey @lash from a copy point of view I ask myself "so what?". Yes you can built a website with it like ALL the others. So what? How is it resolving problem? Why should I take your solution instead of Wix or Wordpress... I don't see a compelling offer.
If you want to know more reach out. I will be please to help you
Ouch! but thanks! that's the feedback I need. I should definitely make that more clear on the copy.
How is it resolving my problem?
Why should I take your solution instead of Wix or Wordpress?
There we go! That would be a great project on (almost) autopilot.
You could save many hours and maximise your conversion rate if you outsource your project.
It will bring you more customers and free up your time to focus on other aspects of the project.
I am a SaaS copywriter. I have a vision for your landing page that will maximise his conversion rate.
Send me an email
felice.ineza@gmail.com