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Feedback on TimeTurtle landing page before launching

by Almar Klein
https://timeturtle.app/

Hey awesome community,

I've had great feedback a few months ago that has helped me improve my landing page immensely. I've applied more changes since then, and would love to have a bit of a checkup before I launch at PH and do more marketing.

The page: https://timeturtle.app/

I'm especially interested to see:

  • Whether the landing page is generally appealing
  • Whether the tagline grabs your attention (and makes sense if you read on)
  • Whether you have a clear idea on what the product is and how its different from the rest.
  • Any other improvements you think are worth mentioning :)

Thanks in advance!

#landing-page-feedback

Almar Klein's avatarAlmar Klein
submitted this linkon August 16, 2019
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    Random thoughts:

    • I like your logo.
    • "Direct insight" is kind of a vague term to me. I think you unpack that below into "Insight & reporting", but is there a way to make the tagline more.. direct? What is the value that "direct insight" provides?
    • Your point of differentiation is the timeline, right? Why not put that front-and-center next to the hero text instead of the turtle? Hit users over the head with your differentiation right away. You can always include the sweet turtle pic down below.
    • Black on dark blue text is kind of low-contrast, even with the text shadow.
    • When I click on the buttons in the screenshot section, the zoom in-out is kind of jarring. Instead, a soft highlight or something without a zoom may be nicer.
    • Raise your prices.
    witten's avatar witten
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      Thanks for the great feedback. This is something I can definitely work with!

      Raise your prices.

      Interesting advice. Can you elaborate? I set the price to a level that I would be willing to pay for a service like this myself. And my assumption is that I can easier take a share of the market if I am setting a competitive price.

      Almar Klein's avatar Almar Klein
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      7 years ago
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        That was kind of a half-joking throw-away line. Common advise to startups is "you're not charging enough", mostly because moving up-market gets you more valuable customers even if there are fewer of them. And so I was parroting that. I don't know if this applies to the market you're in though.

        witten's avatar witten
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    Maybe a gif on the top of page showing the main functionality?

    alexoverend's avatar alexoverend
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      Thanks for the suggestion. So far I've been reluctant since moving stuff can be distracting and its hard to showcase anything useful in just a few secs. I will reconsider though, it might help grabbing attention ...

      Almar Klein's avatar Almar Klein
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