Feedback on UpMock landingpage

Hi Christian—congrats on getting out a landing page! Here are my first impressions.

1. It's a bit difficult to scan: too much text, not enough whitespace
2. The 3D mockup took a pretty long time to load, even on my fast connection. I thought half the page was blank at first.
3. Type: "stunnig" should be "stunning"
4. Email input is black text on dark-grey background, so I can't really read what I'm typing
5. I agree with the other comment about the mockup itself: you should use an actual app! That's how people are going to want to use your product.
6. Your headline should tell me what I can do, e.g. "Create stunning 3D mockups in seconds." Also I'd recommend losing the exclamation points—you don't want to sound like you're shouting

Hope that's helpful. Good luck!

Love it! Maybe it just lacks the policies in the footer.. Great job Christian! :)

I like so far, just some minor things you might want to look on:

• Doesn't https://mockuphone.com/#ios already do this? What makes you unique?
• You might want to change the "I need it!" in the sign up CTA to something better, it comes off the wrong way.
• A more impactful image on the phone would leave a more powerful impression.

Hey @ChristianLutz congrats on launching

Feedback

Is it clear what UpMock does?

• Yes, it's clear. The headline and copywriting are great.

Is it clear who UpMock is supposed to help?

• Can reduce a bit buzzword / technical words for people who are less technical

Is something important missing?

• It takes some time to load the 3D mock up, would be nice to see more case studies / examples of mockup you can make

I'm also re-designing my website for a side project, would be great to hear your feedback. And I think there's room for us to collab :)