Feedback on wanna be Landing page

All the information about the product is in the first paragraph on the page. Because that paragraph is so dense, I scrolled right past it looking for something easier to digest, but wasn't able to find it. Normally I would have just left the page at that point, but because I wanted to leave you a comment I scrolled back up to look for what the service actually is. Then your pragraph starts with "Parzival is an interactive learning platform to prepare Individ...." I fell asleep reading the first sentence and couldn't finish it. Your making me do WAY too much work. Use small words. Make it easy to read.
Maybe something like "Play coding games to prepare for your next job interview!" That's something I can understand...
Edit - Actually I really like that idea. If your idea is different than "building games to help people prepare for their tech interviews", then maybe I'll do that.

Would be good if you could list some of the product's features or if you could add screenshots of the app. Also, since you don't have a lot there, maybe I would be a good idea to move the pricing to a separate page, so if the user subscribes on the pricing page is a validation on the pricing, but if get a lot more subscribers from the home page means the price is too high.

Some suggestions:

• "Digital skills" seems too generic - specifically which skills? And why these skills?
• Who are the trainers? Trainer info tends to be important for courses. Perhaps a brief bio would help.
• Didn't quite understand the packages. Isn't upskilling for individuals? Why team and enterprise?
• The 3 value propositions doesn't quite communicate true value/benefits. Perhaps focus on what the trainee will get at the end of the course?
• design-wise: could be better to inspire confidence. First impressions matter. If you want I can help you with a better site. DM me on Twitter if you keen

Hi Bernardo,

The landing page is a bit too minimalist, it doesn't tell the user what you're actually about.

And digital skills are wide - so I think perhaps try to narrow it down a bit or give a few examples of what kind of training you are offering. ie I'm more focused on development so won't really be interested if the type of training you're offering is more design oriented.

I agree with the general commentary: I'm not clear on the specific kind of training you offer. You've got a some good suggestions from other comments for ways to handle it.

I actually immediately understood the "One Seat for One Seat", and thought it was super compelling. Things being equal, I'd definitely rather pay for a service that helps others. I'd also probably pay a premium for it. In fact, it' strong enough that you'd want to do some content marketing around it, and perhaps show the courses you've given away and the successes of those people as strong social proof.

Good luck - I think you're on to something!

Hi! A few ideas:

• add people images if you are selling a service aimed towards people improvement
• maybe explain more the process, show more the service
  I couldn't understand clearly the service, like you provide the platform? the content?
  You should work on that and come for more specific feedback later as its way to early to provide additional ideas
  If you need help with copywriting in my agency we can help with that
  Best!

It would help to be more specific about what digital skills you're teaching and to whom. Are you teaching accountants Python and R for better data modelling? Are you teaching marketers how best to use social media? Devops best practices to software developers?

Hi,

It's not clear to me what types of jobs you would be training for. Digital is a large topic.

Also, I wouldn't put the One Seat for One Seat part so high on the page. I still couldn't figure out the core concept of what you do and that was distracting.