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Feedback Please π: Ment Virtual Mentor LP
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JupiterMoon
http://www.menthq.com/
The button at the top says "Take the Quiz & Find Out" yet I can't tell from the 3 lines above it. that I need to take a quiz.
Here is a rewritten attempt to get someone to click and take the quiz:
Mental Conditioning leads to More resilient founders
According to... (insert name)
Resilient founders create 95% more wealth*
Take a simple quiz to determine your resiliency.
"Take the Quiz"
I think your underlining is a bit off.
For hierarchy you're using so many things: font size, underlining and italics. But when you do that, they should push the reader to better understand you/your product.
You're also helping the skimmers get more out of your landing page. If I skim now. I'm lost.
In your case, the underlined words almost seem random.
Here are all the words that are underlined:
More Resilient
95% more wealth <- also italicized
your <- also italicized
Have You Mastered the "4 C's of Mental Toughness?
growth
goals
stress-coping
Confidence <- the only C that was underlined.
And then the underlines keep going after a while..
Quiz
personalized <- also italicized
free course
And at the end your twitter link goes to Squarespace: https://twitter.com/squarespace
awesome feedback dude. Thanks so much for taking the time.
The page doesn't say anything about the business model. I think it would make sense to have shown that information so that it would be easier for users to decide whether to choose this mentorship or not.
Also, it's not clear if you offer single-time advice according to the quiz, or recurring newsletters.
great feedback, thank you!! I clarified the offers a bit to reflect your comments.
i like the premise but this is very generic. mentoring / coaching / consulting can mean anything. generic = random which means low quality
the more specific you can get the better. use words or pictures from real people who've been helped. if those don't exist yet pick a few niches.
Thanks for checking it out and giving this great feedback. I've changed the positioning and CTA. Would love to hear your thoughts! menthq.com