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Feedback round 2!

Hey all!

I few months ago, I posted on here for feedback on our landing page and got some very candid and helpful advice. Basically, the page needed to be more professional and legitimate.

Here’s what we have now... we’re a self-guided online program created by PTs that helps people with chronic pain by teaching the science of how pain works and then the skills, habits, and steps to help overcome it.

We’re looking for any and all feedback! Don’t hold back, please!

Www.newframeyourpain.com

P.s - If you experience pain and want to be a free beta tester, shoot me a message!

on January 16, 2021
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    it's ok as a corparate page, if it's only a "bussiness card"
    but as far as marketing, it's kinda anemic, doesn't build trust or feels focused IMHO
    Also "NewFrame" sounds like eyeglasses/sunglasses to me so strongly even if there is nothing else about glasses I wonder what does chronic pain and glasses have to do with eachother, why is the page about both..

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      Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!

      Yes, for now, it's really just a place-holder/business card. We aren't doing any SEO marketing just yet, rather more social-media based.

      However, we would eventually like to use it more for marketing, so perhaps expanding on some stuff with "...read more"s could be helpful?

      Is there anything you'd like to know or see in particular for you to have more trust? Testimonials? Science advisory board?

      Thanks again!

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        who are the people? is it 1-3 people clinic? is it a system developed by someone with credentials? I'd like to see one main person who's the image of this and why he's credible, that would be an excellent focus if relevant
        Someone's story on his pain and solution
        And I think less points here
        "Flare-up reduction methods
        Pain neuroscience education
        Cognitive skills for pain
        Forming better habits
        Nutritional principles for pain
        Sleep hygiene and optimization"
        I guess these would be more features than benefits, maybe you should focus on benefits, what would it help me, not what I would be doing at least that early up on the page

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          Thank you! This is great! I feel all of that is actionable and can be worked on in the next iteration.