*feedback* scrutinize my first landing page
I'm finally taking an important step in my entrepreneurial journey, I'm executing instead of being stuck in ideation and learning. After years of procrastination and "learning," I did learn a lot, I finally made my first landing page for my business. The website was made with Carrd and is very rudimentary and I'd love all honest feedback and suggestions
The Best Time is RIGHT NOW
If you are someone looking to do something online the best thing is to start right now and make something tangible. It doesn't have to be good at all or complete but it must be tangible. By creating something tangible you can feel proud of yourself and you'll have something to share for feedback. It's all about baby steps that make you happy along the way.
I don't think the headline is very good. This may sound harsh, but people don't care what your name is... they care what benefit they will get. Some kind of measurable benefit.
"Decrease your listing time by 12%"
"Sell your homes 3x Faster"
Things like that.
That makes a lot of sense, thank you for the feedback