Feedback wanted - audio headset.

Hi Katarina!

Honestly, your product seems pretty incredible. It really does seem like something I'd want to try and even buy.

I do think the landing page can be improved, though, especially the messaging. In particular, in my humble opinion, your headers are far too vague and not convincing in the least. I think your page would be better if you moved the "revolutionary language" from the main text to subheaders and paragraphs, and moved your "problem solving language" to the headers.

When I say "revolutionary language", I mean anything that says something that is meant to be inspirational, create a sense of awe around the product. IMO, that kind of language is not appropriate for indie hackers trying to sell - it might work for Nike, Apple, and the like, but we IndieHackers don't have audiences that will buy our products because we make them sound cool.

Instead, I would focus more on the problems that this product solves. (You already have language like this on your page, but it's mostly de-emphasized).

Imagine you landed on your homepage, never having heard of your product. Which of these phrases would explain to you the product's benefits and make you want to buy?

Revolutionary language:

• "Seamless interaction is Sentien Audio."
• "Unique feeling."
• "Sentien App - customize your experience."
• "And create your seamless experience."

Problem solving / Pain-killer language:

• "Experience the new audio interface that makes communication effortless, faster, and non-distracting."
• "...leaving you free to hear the world around you."
• "Switch between different activities seamlessly. "
• "[list of problems it solves] ... while keeping your hands free. Anytime."

I would think about re-writing your headlines and organizing your page to explain to the user what problems they're facing (even if they don't realize it yet), and how your product solves those problems. I recommend reading about Amy Hoy's "Pain + Dream + Fix" copywriting method.

Good luck! Keep us up to date on any changes!

Hello,

Please see the image for number reference : https://prnt.sc/oy60x4

1. The marked position seems blank. feels like right-aligned.
2. the text is awkwardly close to the subject face, feels tight
3. The spacing between the top and bottom is different.

~Surjith