[Feedback] What do you think our product does?
Hi everyone,
We've just launched the second iteration of our landing page and we want to make sure we're getting our product across clearly, so we're asking for your help. Based on our landing page, what do you think our product is/does?
Any and all feedback is much appreciated.
Beautiful looking page. I think what you've created in a personalized, private social network made up of people from different circles in my life (golf buddies, family, church friends, etc). What I think it does is enables me to share content to each group of circles individually. I can share funny memes to golf buddies, picture with family, etc). Whatever I share, is only shared with the circle in which I share it. Correct?
Thank you, we've had a few iterations of our landing page and we're quite happy with how it turned out. And you're correct, Circles is exactly as you described it. It's reassuring you were able to get the idea through our landing page, as we're gearing up to start pitching to a large number of potential users.
I'm not looking at the other comments before I type this. Great looking page. I believe you're a social platform where you have to be added to a group before you can communicate with the rest. I think you should get an explainer video to make it more clear.
You got it! And yes we're working on an explainer video. Do you have any recommendations on how/where we can get a explainer video done? The current options on Fiverr, as well as promo video templates we've found online, area bit tacky.
I would describe it as "a new app for group chats"
My immediate reaction is what is wrong/how is this better than whatsapp. That has the benefit of everyone already being on it so no need to download new things and invite others etc.
Although we plan on having group messaging feature, our product is more akin to a social media app rather than a messaging app.
Hi Ayub,
I recently launched a landing page as well. https://www.scribbl.co/
I also recently pitched 40 founder their business in 6 words or less based on what I learned from their landing page. Check out my pitches here.
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/let-me-try-and-pitch-your-business-in-6-words-or-less-e1cb07ffc0
The first thing that came to mind when reading your copy was this is like a way better text message thread. Then as I continued to read I thought maybe this is like instagram specifically for groups.
How far off am I?
Instagram for groups would be an accurate description. We're trying to build a social media platform that's group-centric. Do you have any suggestions to make this more clear on our landing page?
Maybe be more explicit in your headline. Right now it say "Share your moment, with Circles"
The assumption in this headline is that people will automatically connect Circles with groups. Maybe you could be more explicit so that people instantly get what this is...
One idea...
Share moments made for inner circles
Ah I see. Thanks for the feedback!
You can go to Code Canyon as well or Theme Forrest. Buy a template, then have the designer customize it for you for an additional fee. I did that a few years back with an explainer video for my crowdfunding book. I think it turned out fantastic.