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Fellow founders, need advice from you!

Hey IHers!

I am building ThriftMVP a pre-revenue startup marketplace. I am running some twitter ads and creating some content online and I noticed an unusual pattern which I haven't encountered in older projects.

The audience is highly engaging and likes the product (on socials and on conversations) but the signup rate is considerably low. I tweaked the copy to better reflect on our mission and actual product, so I wanted to know if the copy makes sense / delivers the punchline in case I am too biased over my own design!

For context, our audience consists of:

  1. Aspiring founders looking to save development costs and time instead of building from scratch
  2. Founders looking to sell their old work
  3. Investors building a startup portfolio

Thanking everyone in advance!

on July 22, 2022
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    Hey there - I think what you do is clear, but your main CTA is to view the listings, not to sign up. (Small note: I would add an "s" since there is more than one listing, to "view listings" on the button)

    It's not clear why I would need to sign up. Something that could be more interesting would be to subscribe to a newsletter than will notify me when new listings become available.

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      Thank you, that is actually in my notes for my next batch update!