Finally overcame my launch paralysis and looking for feedback....:)

Hi @charleskiarie,

Congrats on overcoming your launch paralysis :)

First thing that comes to mind is that grammatical and spelling errors immediately make the product seem less legitimate. Be careful not to mix up "your" and "you're" -- and you misspelled "guarantee" somewhere in there as well.

Your landing page explains what your product should do well enough. Can you explain why this is better than the embeddable forms services that exist out there today?

@charleskiarie the How it works explains well and being a non technical person, I was also able to understand it. Just add a columns where you explain the pain point and the benefits.

Hey @charleskiarie

First, congratulations on launching! That's a big step.

I have some thoughts on your landing page copy and the general design.

Your headline is a little confusing right now.
"We are a mailer api for your contact form that works with awesome static websites."

My biggest question is: Who is your ideal customer?

Getting that nailed down will help pull the copy out of their needs.

Why do they need awesomeContact? Are they non-technical people who can't work out the backend for sending emails? Are they somebody who needs to save time by not developing the backend?

What language would they use when they say they need a service like awesomeContact?

On a technical note, as a developer, I don't think of this service as an API. I think of it as something less technical, in a good way. Typically an API requires sending an http request and dealing with whatever formats are defined by the contract. Even the simplest ones require some level of development. This seems lighter than that.

I think you can actually summarize what you're offering in your headline, while keeping it interesting.

I would do something like:
"Your form + awesomeContact = email sent"

That, in my mind, illustrates that people are really just submitting their form to awesomeContact.

In your subhead:
"You're visitors don't have to leave the browser to get in touch with you."

"You're" should be "Your". I didn't understand why somebody would have to leave the browser to get in touch. I am assuming because they'd have to open their email client. I think that sentence is a little confusing.

I would be a little more explicit on what the service is. Using the headline idea I suggested, you could do something like:
"Simply submit your form to awesomeContact and let us handle sending the email"

I recommend making your CTA buttons bigger and keep the button text the same.

Minor thing but I would leave the HTML formatting in your code examples.

Under Pricing, I recommend a change:
"That means for a one off payment of $5.99 awesomeContact is free for 2 months and with full refund gaurantee."

If the customer is paying $5.99, it isn't actually free for 2 months. It's $5.99.

This line needs punctuation if you want to keep it. I don't think you actually need it though.
"All I ask for is brutal honesty like right now if you didn't sign-up let me know why here any and all feedback is appreciated."

A design critique:
The purple on green is hard to focus on. It made it hard to read that headline. I'd go with a white background or rework the color combination.

Good luck and I hope it takes off!