Finally put up a landing page - what do you think?

Thanks for the feedback! Yes it'll be paid, but I'm still figuring out the exact model. Will be putting that up before the beta launch.

I completely agree that there's so much text there. I'm thinking of making the subtext for each one of those points expandable but hidden by default.

Here's the feedback I promised:

I think the "Use this product if you..." / "Don't use it if you..." sections work really well. It connects to the progress the buyer is interested in making and pushes away the people who wouldn't be a good fit anyway.

I also feel like the product is bold in its claims. It runs the risk of appearing too good to be true. However, that anxiety is warded off a little bit when you signal who the app isn't for. When you communicate that the app won't do all the work for you, that you have to put in the work (10 minutes a day), the page builds trust. It shows how your app will contribute to a super-power for those who are serious about doing the work.

I like this page and the product a lot. Hope it works out.

Thank you so much!
What is 30x500? I've never heard of it.

Hey thanks for the feedback, and excited to have you part of the beta!

Hah interesting about gumroad, I didn't think of that. I just picked the name because it's easily brandable (have launched products before where nobody can remember the name and it sucks)

Appreciate the tip on the beta email form. I was hoping that putting the April date down would make MORE people sign up, knowing that it's soon and not some undisclosed data in the future. But I'll think about the framing some more. Thank you.

Hey Curtis - thank you so much for the video! You bring up some very good points. I'd be happy to chat live about your upcoming product launch - sending you an email now.

Thank you! Glad you liked it - I was a bit unsure about that part. But eventually landed on including it. Initially I'd rather have less people sign up, but have them be a better fit for the platform.