Hi. Any feedback on our first attempt at a landing page is very much appreciated!
Does it make sense? Do you understand what the service is? Are the value propositions clear?
Especially interested to hear feedback from hardware startup founders as they are our main target audience.
Hi
I would definitely take @SUPERViLLAiN advice and add an image of Gif. I would also advise you to have an objective for your Landing Page such as having person signup for trial, newsletter, notification or to purchase. At the moment a visitor to your website would not know what they are supposed to do, what path to follow, hence detail your user path for them.
Use a form for signups, and look at using something like MailChimp to build a list. You can also add a video to provide an introduction to you and explain your product/service and its benefits for the end user.
In summary
Hope this helps?
Thank you. This definitely helps - we are working on the second iteration of the page. Will make sure to show this here.
Yes some examples of your past work would be nice
Thank you. Yes, we are preparing examples as well, as separate items, with a description, photos etc.
yes...rally go in...as a new Yorker..idont trust sites that want my business...but don't show me past work history or proof of work
I would include some kind of image/gif to display what you do in order for people to understand your proposition instantly.
Thank you. Images is an interesting idea that needs to be thought through. Team's core proposition sits in the area of circuit design and electronics. To me, at a first glance, it's counter-intuitive to try and describe what the team does with one picture as these services are, to some degree, abstract. But will certainly think about it and give it a try!