First Blog Post - Feedback Please

Hi Indie Hackers,

I just posted my very first blog post. I was super nervous and anxious because I'm not a writer.

Would really appreciate any feedback or advice on how to improve and things I can do better next time.

Here is the link:

https://achilleion.medium.com/the-only-security-tip-that-matters-a1bb12fed62b

Thanks!!!