First draft of landing page, looking for feedback.
Hi all,
First post here.
My name is Mark and I have worked & consulted extensively as a software development and delivery manager helping companies with large scale agile transformations and software deliveries. Over the years I've been very frustrated with the tooling in this space, so I've built a SaaS data analytics platform focused on improved visualisation of the entire software development & delivery ecosystem & helping drive best practice.
The product is currently targeted at consultancies as resellers, who can use it to automate visualisation of their customers delivery ecosystem and have all the appropriate tools in one place.
Here is the landing page:
https://www.methodshift.co.uk/mission-control/
I'm looking for feedback on:
- The general idea
- aesthetic design
- copywriting
I'm also looking for early adopters & people to join an expanded private beta, so if you are interested in better visualisation and predictability for your deliveries please send me a message !
It is light on social proof at the moment, but I hope to remedy that with the expanded private beta.
Hi Mark,
I think the "3 simple steps" part needs to be placed higher up and maybe elaborated on. By the time I got to it, I was feeling completely overwhelmed by the animated dashboards and fantastical (and a bit generic-sounding) claims. My brain nearly skipped over it completely!
If Mission Control really is that simple to set up, it should probably be the main focus of the site.
Also, unless I'm misreading something, the words "Move Past Dashboards" appear right above a dashboard.
Personally, I would limit the animations to 1 or 2 elements at most.
It also sounds like you might have a story to tell about how you came to develop your own tooling solution. Might be worth writing up in a blog post or something. It could help explain how Mission Control is different from competing products.
Ok, thanks for the feedback Yori.
Some good points to reflect on.