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First Landing Page built. Would love feedback.

https://www.completethatcourse.com

I've built websites for other people since 1997 but never run my own website (other than a personal blog). I've decided to scratch my own itch and answer the question:

Have you ever bought an online course but never completed it?

Landing page is at https://www.completethatcourse.com

Feedback welcome!

submitted this linkon September 1, 2019
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    Hi!

    Congratulations on your landing page. Looks cool, I like the survey approach, although the link back to google feels out of the place.

    I feel like it'd be useful to:

    • have an example notification shown on your landing page
    • show some statistics (how many start/buy a course vs how many bother to complete it; average cost of a course and how much cash is drained down the drain) to motivate people.

    Hope this helps.

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      Thanks for the feedback.

      I'm not sure how I'd find reliable statistics to show on the site - other than the £500+ that I've spent on courses and not completed them :)

      Re the link back to Google - I'm partly through a blog post that details the benefits of taking online courses and I was planning on linking to that.

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    I like it that you're first qualifying people by your mini-questionnaire. That's innovative. I have some reservations about the design though. Maybe a combination of cleaner typography + some funny illustrations would work better. Also, have you considered including a personal video address on the signup page?

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    Hey Andrew,

    Your copy is great! The pitch is really easy to understand + I think that starting with the question is cool.

    My first impression of the 90's style was that the site wasn't very professional but I guess I kind of like it now.

    How did you build the page? Is this done with a page builder or is it hand-coded?

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      The landing page was built by hand. I'm a full time developer but not a designer, which is why it doesn't look that great :).

      I hadn't realised it had a 90's feel until I read the feedback here. I wanted to avoid it looking like all the other landing pages out there.

      Thanks for the feedback!

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    I actually like the old school design motif you have going on, it helps you stand out from the crowd. I would add some sort of a fun message when the user clicks "No, not me" instead of redirecting them to google.

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    Honestly the initial impression brings '90s to my memories but of course it might work for the 30+ crowd. Still, I'd myself prefer something a bit more futuristic or modern.

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      Thanks. I'd not thought of it as having a 90's feel but you may be right!

      I'm trying to get the fun but useful feel to the project. As for the 30+ crowd, I'm not sure the age demographic of the target audience. Perhaps that should be something I need to research more.

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    Love it on mobile - my only suggestion is to really look at the profile of who you are targeting. I'm guessing late 20-something techie crowd?

    A lot of uncompleted courses are from your 30-50 year olds who basically struggled through the shitty LMS's of times past. (And sadly, still current.) So maybe a different style landing page for them might work better. (I'd think Medium.)

    Also these people would probably be more motivated to work for the sense of completion, and money spent well, rather than any certification.

    But, brilliant idea!

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      Thanks Ki.

      I've not really given much thought to the target audience, so maybe I need to look into that a bit more.

      Good point about the motivation too. For me, online courses have been a very important part of my career progression, so maybe adding 'selling' points like that would be better for the project.

      Thanks again!