First Landing Page Feedback

Everything looks good, but I personally would delete all the links in the upper part and only leave the one to schedule a call, separate the sub titles with blank space and do not use capital letters within the sentences only at the beginning. On the other hand, the main title should be more attractive and oriented to explain the benefit of working with you, the short description should be "why" and "where they will see" that benefit of working with you. Add to that what they have already told you and you will be more solid in design.

pd.
a little example:

https://xd.adobe.com/view/2398ab20-96f2-40d2-675c-aeee1d5d049c-55a9/?fullscreen&hints=off

Hey, the page looks good. I would suggest changing several things:

• You have a clear CTA on the home page, however the green text on the left kind of competes with the button for your attention. Possible solution would be to make the text grey.

• The green text is a bit long for a heading, try adding a larger font heading like "Automating your business one task at a time" or something similar.

• Move the CTA below the heading + green text and add an image from (undraw)[https://undraw.co/] (free vectors) or similar place.

• The testimonials are a bit hard to follow, rearrange them so the quote is at the top and the person and position below, having one quote on separate line. When adding the person name / position use a lighter grey colour to decrease contrast with the quote.

• Put some vertical margins around the second CTA below the testimonials

• The links at the bottom are a bit much (personal opinion) you can remove them if you want and add some whitespace so the About Us section is not at the bottom.

Hope this helps a bit.

Thanks for the feedback everyone, made some updates and it definitely looks better (well in my opinion).

https://divisionmax.com/

Still making changes;

• A couple of people said "use cases" of sorts would be really helpful and I agree
• I'm still finding the testimonials a bit cluttered but I'm trying to work around the carrd.co options

Nice, neat and clean @gavinw - I can see your how and what regarding your service offering.

However, I think it's missing why your service is stronger than others. I'm also in the middle of changing my site layout, would be awesome to exchange ideas!

No expert here but some casual thoughts... viewing this on desktop btw.

Everything being symmetrical meant that I didn't have a clear visual path through the information. I found I ended up scrolling down the bottom first before coming back up to the top. Your headline has equal visual weighting (size, scale, sceeenspace) to your call to action. Would be great to find some way to keep the viewer hanging out here.

Same feedback for the bottom half. A lot of left and right side content. Some might argue too much to read.

Hate to say it - but do you really need the names of all of the people there. Doesn't mean much to the first time viewer and takes up valuable space. Might be nice to have more empty, white space instead for your big message to shine. ***correction - now that I circle back - it wasn't obvious to me that the names were the people behind the quotes.... suggest shrink that name down and put it under the actual quote to build a visual relationship and free up the space on the left. The quotes, in my opinion, are more important than the names.

Vary the size of your fonts - more focus on the big stuff. Let the smaller details be a smaller and/or different font.

Is there an example that you could include that highlights what you have done for someone? Most of this is more of the softer, fluffier corporate speak. It is still not 100% clear what your technical solution to the mundane tasks actually looks like.

Keep in mind that I looked through this quickly - which means I've likely missed details - but that is also the point of a landing page. Draw me in as opposed to making me do the work.

Hope this helps!

Simple and clean design :)

The copy needs a lot of work though (IMHO).

Skip talking about strategy session and design session (everyone does that, no need to talk about it).

Who's the end customer for your service? Call them out in the text.

Show more exactly what type of work you do in Python & Django. I would give a concrete example, maybe something like:
"ABC company reached out to us and wanted to automate their customer support process, in their previous situation they had 3 people working full time with doing X and Y. After identifying their workflow and understanding their process we noticed that there was many repetitive tasks that could be automated. Thru using THIS and THAT we managed to fully automate 90% of the whole process and free up 2 people"

Not exactly like that but some type of case study or concrete example would be something I would like to see.

Good luck with it :)

P.S.
Once you are done with the site feel free to submit it to https://drrac.co/#websites-made-with-carrd

Too White. Try dual tone or inverse the green to white. Hope this helps.
Try Canva.

I like the layout and the contrasting green. I would recommend some background color to separate the sections. Just a simple light gray behind the About Us would be enough to separate the footer from the Testimonials.

add a little color and put your CTA earlier