First landing page launch ever. Feedback?

One more easy test: swap one of the generic feature blurbs for a tiny before/after example of a calmer workday outcome. The page already feels thoughtful, but one concrete transformation would make the value more immediate.

That kind of proof usually lifts sign-up intent faster than adding more explanation.

Follow-up idea: add a tiny objection-handling strip (time to value, setup effort, risk) before the first CTA. This often unlocks clicks from interested-but-hesitant visitors.

If useful, I can mock this directly against your existing copy so it’s fast to ship.

VERY GOOD! which tool have you used to build it?

Hi, Jonas.

Overall, your landing page looks good but here's how you can make it better:

• The heading of each feature should be a benefit. Write it from the user's POV.
  What is the user going to get from using this feature?

• Handle objections. The benefits sound good but your user might still not convert.
  Your best bet?
  Answering their burning questions before they ask it. You can use a FAQs section for this.

• Get clear on the packages you offer.
  What's Alpha?

• How does the tool work?
  Can you give a short and clear run-down of how the user can start using the tool right away?

Hi Jonas,

Great job and best of luck on your first launch!

Here are a few comments from me:

• The landing page looks great overall! I love the little details like the background clouds moving ever so slightly :D
• A little demo gif/video might let the user better understand the product before signing up and reduce friction
• Perhaps a more general "Mute Socials" can replace the "Mute Slack"? I was a bit thrown off by it because I am a Slack hater so it wasn't relevant to me but I assume the future idea is for the user to be able to mute various social channels?
• The links in the footer might use a bit more vertical spacing on mobile views
• There is a ";" at the end of your HTML that renders after the footer (this always happens to me in Next/React haha)
• In the app, when adding a task I was initially pressing ✓ after putting in the name of the task thinking it saves the name but instead it marked as complete - perhaps a small tooltip on hover can clarify what they do?
• In the app, consider using a monospace font for the timer so it doesn't move/shift layout

Awesome stuff, usually when I need to focus I just go to Youtube and blast some metal album and the music serves as my timer. I can see how purposefully setting up a focus session can start putting you in the zone.

Uri

Here's what went through my head when I visited the homepage:

"If you like Deep Work,
you'll love this."
Hm, what is it.

"Have the best deep work sessions of your life with focus timer, music, coach and more."
Ok got it.

Scrolled down.

Wanted to be able to do a sample without signing in.

If it wasn't on Indiehackers and me giving feedback, I would've bounced from the page at this point.

Decided I'd sign in so I could give better feedback.

Got an error: "Unexpected Application Error!"

My main suggestion would be to have a demo someone can do without signing in. Even if just a 15 second demo. Or a video. Though an interactive demo where I can play and pause and switch is even nicer.

Page looks great, love the selling of the benefit of the product rather than the product itself. But, it was slightly unclear to me exactly what the product it. Is it an app? A website? A calendar? I'd like to know something about the product before plugging in my Google credentials. I'm guessing it's an app, judging by the features.

A slight hint as to what it is in the tagline might be nice. This isn't great, but is just an example:

WorkCalmly lives in your menu bar and helps you have the best deep work sessions of your life with focus timer, music, coach and more.

Or, a quick little screenshot of where it lives on your computer or something...

let me check your landing page

So your message is "If you like Deep Work, you'll love this." ...

Question 1 ... what is deep work for you ? for me is sleeping :)

Question 2 ... "you'll love this" what do you mean by this ?

Question 3 ... what do you want to sell ? i didn't got it ...

Question 4 ... do you want to sell a subscription/account that as a bunch of features to calm you down ? like music ?

Question 5 ... earning badges calms you down ?

Question 6 ... looking at timers decreases your stress ?

I wish you the best of luck to your project/app/site

Pedro

Looks good, the copy seems good, pretty understandable for me. I get the gist of the product - a timer for when you need to focus.

A screenshot reflecting what the app looks like, might be pretty good to visualize what i'm signing up for

Congratulations on your first landing page launch! It looks great! Here are some feedback for you:

The headline is strong and attention-grabbing. It clearly states the benefits of your product, which is what you want potential customers to focus on.
The image is high quality and relevant to the product. It helps to create a visual appeal and make the landing page more engaging.
The copy is clear and concise. It explains the product in detail and highlights its benefits.
The call to action is clear and easy to understand. It tells visitors what you want them to do, which is to sign up for the waitlist.
The design is clean and professional. It's easy to navigate and doesn't have any distractions.
Overall, I think you did a great job with your first landing page launch! Here are a few additional tips that you can keep in mind for future landing pages:

Test different headlines and images to see what gets the best results. You can use a tool like Google Analytics to track your landing page traffic and conversions.
Make sure your copy is persuasive and convincing. Use strong verbs and active voice to get your point across.
Use a clear and concise call to action. Tell visitors exactly what you want them to do, such as "Sign up for the waitlist" or "Buy now."
Test different designs to see what looks best. Use a tool like Unbounce to create and test different landing page designs.
I hope this feedback is helpful!

This seems like a product I would use. I signed up with Google but I am on vacation so going to install on PC when I get back to work. One recommendation is to make the UI mobile friendly for iOS users who might check out your app through the phone, so you do not lose any customers like that. I could get back to you with a more detailed review once I get back. Overall this would be very helpful for keeping focus stats on indie projects I do!

I have a question. I want to use two sidebar left and Right on my website Can I use it or not?

Congratulations on the launch! Your landing page looks great and captures the essence of your alpha product. The design and layout are clean and engaging. Keep up the good work! 🚀🌟

Very good

Awesome page, very clean! As I'm building currently multiple landing pages for upcoming products to test interest/ sales - do you think it would be good if there's an online web builder aimed only at product landing pages to improve time delivery?

Very sleek design. My notes would be look at the copy. Appeal to a wider group of people by avoiding swearing even if ** out.

I would add one video, gif or animation to demonstrate one key feature in action. Just gives the person something to hold their attention for a bit longer.

The USP of the app is a little unclear, use the copy to tell the viewer why this product is better than a competitor.

Good luck!

Love this Landing page, great colors, good arrangement of items. But I didn't see the prices, I think it's important. Before registering / subscribing - I always get acquainted with the prices and description of the plans. As a user, I want to know if there is a free plan, what is included in it, what is included in the paid plan and whether I am ready to pay for it.
I see that they indicated that it is free on alpha, but I would like to know the price of the product in advance - especially if I decided to use it on an ongoing basis.

Landing page was very clear. I agree with some of the other comments. Deal with my objections. Mine that came up? What will this cost after alpha? How long will this take? Is this an app etc? I don’t use X but I use Y instead (for messaging for example). Will this work for that?

The features are quite clear. I can quickly understand what it's about.

What I would like to have answered is:

• Is it a mobile app, a web app, or a Mac/Windows app?
• What will be the cost after the alpha phase?

The logo appears to resemble a gamepad, so my initial impression was that this website is related to gaming or designed for gamers.

Don't forget to test your landing using Google PageSpeed, it can give you some tips on how to make your landing load faster for example.

I tried your product, and this is not bad at all. Congrats. During "onboarding" I did not want to connect slack, so I figured out you can just click "Next". But instead of next, maybe better to have "Skip connecting Slack" or just "Skip" there. Which is more intutive in my opinion. And then small hint next to it "You can connect Slack later". This might improve situation with people wantint to abandon onboarding because of this.