First landing page - looking for copy feedback
We just put up our first landing page and are looking for feedback on the copy.
We want to make sure that we are achieving the following:
- clearly defined the problem we are solving
- clearly explaining how we solve that problem
- clearly identifying who our service is for
Thanks in advance!
I get what it is after reading the page, but I don't think it's immediately clear form the headline. I would try some alternatives that are bit more straight forward and lead with the unique value.
Your copy will be be powerful if you rewrite it using active voice. For instance, instead of "Have your early-stage product reviewed..." (passive) you could try something like "Get actionable feedback on your early-stage product from design leads at top tech companies." Notice how the latter puts the reader in control?
I would also move the form up and add a call-to-action above it for context.
Best of luck.
This is a really exciting service! I love the stat about design-centric products.
I feel like the value proposition is clear, so my questions are around what happens if I put my email in the box.
Is it first come first served? Will there be an application process? Will it cost a ton of money, given that these are top experts?
These are all great points!
Now that you've raised them, the current call to action feels too vague. I'm going to rework that area a bit and try to better describe the process so a person visiting might feel more comfortable submitting their information.
Thank you for the feedback :)