Hey folks,
With this great community I'm excited, but also a little apprehensive because as the title explains, this is the 1st time I've put a landing page up anywhere specifically.
Anyway, I'm trying to get over myself here. I'm deliberately not going to give any intro. Here it is: https://businessboyscout.com
All constructive feedback welcome.
Hey @thunk, it takes some balls to ask people to criticise your landing page but it also generates traffic, so it's a double-edged sword.
Here is some feedback from my perspective. If you are gonna help people with creating plans for business continuity start with a more specific event for a specific industry.
This is so broad that no one will have the 'Aha! That's me' moment.
What I do like about your landing page, is how spacious the content blocks are. Perhaps add some testimonials from previous clients (if you have some)?
thank you so much @MrAtiebatie.
Testimonials will definitely come as and when I get some customers/clients!
I like color consistency! Maybe you should make all the icons the same purple color? (or a darker purple)
Hey @thunk, I needed to go to "Services" to get some feel for what it is that your business actually offers. You might want to make the offering more clear on the landing page.
thanks @LouisaDeBeer, great feedback