Hi guys π My first post on Indie Hackers, nervouxited!!
My husband and I are a designer-writer team. Looking at ways to grow our 2-people business. Weβve been at it for a while but always shied away from marketing π Work poured in only through word-of-mouth. Now looking at ways to improve that!
Request you to check out our landing page newly built in Framer β¨
Specifically looking for:
Appreciate any tips and words of advice.
Thanks a bunch in advance β€οΈ
Hi,
Stunning design! I've added some ideas for you to consider - https://visualdebug.com/show/bayzil.com
Cool tool, visual debug π
Thank you! I'm definitely going to fix the first one. On copy, yes I have the same mixed feelings. Will test it out. Thanks for your help :)
Awesome, ping me when you make changes and I will help you out!
Hey π happy to offer feedback here.
At first glance (or the 5-second grunt test), I can tell this site is some sort of design service that offers quick design of MVPs, websites and brands. 7 days and $5,000.
I don't currently need these services, but I have in the past and work in the industry. Scrolling through the site, I have a ton of questions the FAQs don't answer. Here they are:
A. Define 'MVP'? What, specifically, is covered within your definition?
B. You mention you work Mon-Fri, but it's a 7 day turnaround. So is that 7 working days?
C. What if I only need branding? Or a website? Or an MVP? Do I get a discount? I don't like the idea of dropping $5k for a website if someone else gets an MVP, a website and a brand design out of it.
D. Branding is a fluffy term. What does that cover? Visual identity? Brand personality? Purpose/mission/values/tone of voice, etc? What are the specific deliverables?
E. What guarantees do you have in place to make sure you fulfil your 7 day promise?
F. Why don't you use Adobe?
G. There's only three of you in the company (not a problem - all for it!) so is there a cap on the number of clients you take at any one time? Is there a waiting list? How soon after I pay you do you start?
H. What time zone do you operate in?
I. How do we communicate above and beyond the 3 day check in?
J. Lastly, as I review the site further, I'm not clear on whether this price includes the development too? Or is that extra?
All in all, it's an interesting concept. I just need more information about it. It feels like the start of a sales pitch, enough for me to want to hear more, but not enough for me to contact you to get that info.
These are all valid points and crucial to address, especially the ambiguity around the cost. I'm glad I posted it here first before going to LinkedIn π Thank you so much for taking the time to help out π I'll be addressing them all and updating the site right away.