Free 2cent on your landing-page

By Jeddi

May 12, 2018

Hi,

I'm a growth marketer. I help businesses to grow, that simple.

I love IH, so I want to give some free help to you boyzz-girlzz

Put a link to your Landing page and I'll give you some free advice on how to improve it.

Love.

Jeddi

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I'm always up for feedback and advice: https://propertyments.com

Michael Meyer

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  Login/sign up should not be a CTA
  
  Add a clear CTA on each section
  
  too much copy on application features
  
  Application details looks cheap. Re-design that.
  
  Bigger CTA on pricing plans
  
  Add testimonials
  -Add live chat
  
  Explain the pain, why a property management tool is useful? We gain time & $
  
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    Really great feedback, I'm working through a few of these now. Thanks so much for taking the time!
    
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Thanks!

https://wiseer.io

I am relaunching with a beta in a few days/weeks. Then i will swap focus from developers to general public on the landing page.

Johan Lejdung

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Thanks,

https://servicebot.io

Ben Sears

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Hey @Jeddi Thanks a lot in advance, Appreciate the offer
https://coinarbitrage.org/

"Brace for impact"

Amr Ali

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Thanks in advance Jeddi ! https://www.ymello.com/

yMachi

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  Add exit pop-up
  
  Too much space between tagline & header picture
  
  Not fan of menu selectors
  
  add pricing on your homepage
  
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    Thank you Jeddi, i really appreciated your feedback. Can you suggest me or point to the best exit-popup execution you saw ? Cause many of them are poor executed and its over and over again the same. You are not fan of the hamburger menu or the way how we do it ? Thank you again !
    
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Would love to hear your feedback on https://devpups.com/social-pug/

Thank you!

Mihai Iova

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  Bad good idea to put social sharing links as CTA
  
  “ a pro toolkit to help you..” section what it is? a pricing description? not clear at all
  
  you should re-structure your page
  
  capture emails. add exit pop-up
  
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    Thank you for taking the time to write the feedback. I do plan on re-structuring the entire landing page with a simpler message and focusing on how the main features will help users.
    
    I will look into the idea of adding an exit pop-up, probably with a discount offer, but I'm a bit reluctant of the idea, as I see it as devaluing the product. Where you thinking of something else for the exit pop-up strategy?
    
    Mihai Iova
    
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Thanks! What a kind offer. I bet that you will be busy, busy, busy! I keep changing mine, and I would love feedback on the current rendition. Also, I'm setting up more than one landing, but this is main https://www.gifts-done.com

Jess Chandler

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  Re-design everything. Hire ManyPixels
  
  But your service looks awesome.
  
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Thanks @Jeddi ! I'd love some feedback... http://www.striptogether.co

Matthew

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  Love concept
  
  Add testimonials
  
  Add exit pop-up
  
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    Much appreciated!
    
    Sorry I don't understand, what's an exist pop-up?
    
    Thanks :)
    
    Matthew
    
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      pretty sure it is a typo and means 'exit pop-up'
      
      Jess Chandler
      
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        Didn't know that was the name for those pop-unders...I really do hate them, but maybe I should bite the bullet and give 'em a shot.
        
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        Hello,
        Yes "exit" sorry.
        You hate them for 2 reasons:
        
        They do it badly
        
        You're the wrong target
        
        Collecting e-mails is the second (sometimes main) focus for a landing page.
        
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would love to get some feedback and advice for https://reimburse-it.com/en/

eayollie

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  1 CTA, not 2
  
  Split everything in sections
  
  Design looks cheap. Try ManyPixels
  
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Would love to get some feedback on www.brandingguide.co main thing I've been thinking around recently is how to show that "pro brands" is an add on not a plan itself... Thanks in advance!

Chris Key

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  “Scrolling gif” doesn’t fit on the screen on mobile. Same on Safari.
  
  Pricing is weird. Pro brands looks like a plan. Why it’s only an add-on? That’s a plan for me. confusing
  
  ADD CTA on each section + on each pricing plan
  
  Add live chat
  
  Add exit pop up
  
  Too much links on footer
  
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    Thanks Jeddi :)
    The pricing is the thing I've struggled with most on showing it. The Pro is an add on as you can have unlimited brands on the free plan and upgrade just the ones you need to pro.
    White label is a plan but comes with 5 pro upgrades included.
    The Pro did start out as a plan but we thought the jump from unlimited "basic" brands to unlimited "pro" would either be too expensive for the customer or we'd have to do it too cheaply to entice people to upgrade. So we thought the ability to upgrade those that you wanted to would make it better.
    Would love to hear your thoughts on it and any suggestions with putting that across in a pricing structure.
    
    And thanks for the other feedback too :)
    
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I'll try to do a little feedback for each landing as soon as I have time :)

Love

Jeddi

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Thx @Jeddi, here is mine https://sendtofred.com

Oron Adam

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  Add chat and try to give something on it.
  
  Add exit pop-up “5 steps how to avoid bounces” => then retarget them
  
  6 pricing plans, too much & not clear
  
  good landing
  
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Thanks @jeddi - here's our landing page: engigogo.com

Saurabh Yadav

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  Bigger CTA
  
  Add CTA on each section
  
  Tagline not clear. You’re explaining what’s engigogo. Explain why they have to join you. “Why” first.
  
  Add testimonials
  
  Add exit pop-up
  
  Check copy size. Looks weird (follow h1=>h2=>p)
  
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Thanks for volunteering!

We do have a new version that should be going live in a few days, but would love to see your feedback - www.recapped.io

Mark Fershteyn

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  Bigger CTA
  
  ADD 2 CTA on sections
  
  Add testimonials
  
  Add exit pop-up
  
  maybe add pricing page+ FAQ on homepage
  
  ADD CTA below FAQ
  
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Hi, https://viralquotesonline.com , thanks for your free help! we really aprecciate it.

Nicolas Granja

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  Bigger CTA
  
  Design looks a bit cheap. I’m sure you can easily improve it with a good template
  
  Add testimonials
  
  Check your copy size,looks weird. Follow h1=>h2=>p
  
  Add exit pop-up giving
  
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Great!
threadreaderapp.com
It's b2c dunno if it enters in your deal

Jérôme Gx

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  Good Landing
  
  Double CTA “support” & “search”. Focus on only 1 (but I understand, you want to catch ppl to support you)
  
  Love (we’ll continue chat’ on telegram)
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Thanks @Jeddi! https://www.newcraft.io/

Cam

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  Awesome landing page
  
  You could maybe add an exit pop-up, would be a great pre-launch-lead builder
  
  Add data: “9x chance to get a job on top companies showing your portfolio” etc
  
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That's a great offer, thanks! I often give feedback myself, but more on the technical site.

Excited for your feedback: https://www.landen.co

Alexis

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  Hey! I just noticed your website is very similar in style to mine (https://knvrt.co/). Even down to the two-toned payment card. Looks like we both have great taste! :D
  
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    ok at the start I thought it's not too similar but then the payment card. That creeps me out a bit how similar that is. It's also an interesting lesson in originality. Makes you wonder how many websites like this there are out there.
    
    I got my inspiration from here: http://www.goodweb.design/sites/Upcase
    
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      Haha yeah, that is what sealed it for me beyond "oh, similar Purples!" it was almost freaky :D haha.
      
      Oh thats a nice site, I haven't seen it before. I have also not seen "Goodweb.design" before either, so adding that to my bookmarks for inspiration 😉
      
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Hey @Jeddi It is always good to get some external thoughts on this sort of stuff! -http://knvrt.co/
I have a new design almost ready to go with fixes/improvements from the initial MVP, but i'd love to get a growth marketers insights on it!

Kieran Parker

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Woah - Thanks a lot for this! https://meetingtheory.com/

Glenn Espinosa

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  Sign up with microsoft.. is it crucial for your product? If no, delete that immediately. So a Facebook-gmail or email signup
  
  pricing-demo-signup links broken
  
  exit pop-up giving something free => then retarget
  
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    Thanks for the feedback!
    
    My initial users use Office 365 so I need the microsoft sign up! Interesting that the pricing/demo/signup pages are broken. I'll have to check on those.
    
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Thanks @Jeddi. Here's my landing page: https://www.referralsafe.com/

Kevin Adams

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  First tagline should be bigger
  
  CTA bigger
  
  below your tagline, do not put your 3 points (confusion, disconnects..) add a section for that.
  
  Pricing not clear
  
  ADD CTA on each pricing
  
  Links redirecting to youtube? no, embed that on your website
  
  Add live chat
  
  add exit pop-up
  
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    Hey thank you @jeddi. I've knocked how half of these so far. I appreciate you talking a look.
    
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Thanks @jeddi - here's our landing page: freetrain.co

Ben Matthews

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  Bigger CTA
  
  On a landing page, you should have only 1 kind of CTA. In your case, you have a Facebook group CTA too. Why do not put a live chat with crisp.chat and add an invitation into the chat ?
  
  Too much links
  
  Add scarcity (only X spot left, etc)
  
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    Hey @jeddi, just to follow up that I have taken action on your suggestions for freetrain.co:
    
    Added a bigger CTA
    
    Added crisp.chat
    
    Added a Facebook Group CTA in crisp.chat
    
    Reduced the amount of links
    
    I'm working on the scarcity point!
    
    Thanks again for your advice.
    
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https://convopanda.com

Harry Whelchel

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  Good Landing. You chose a long copy format. Try an A/B test with a small copy format.
  
  Add CTA in your text: links + buttons every 2-3 paragraphs
  
  Add some testimonials
  
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    Great feedback Jeddi.
    
    Not getting enough traffic to justify A/B testing long vs short form copy right now.
    
    I do like the idea of adding CTA links and buttons throughout the text. Or maybe even graphic illustrations to reset attention.
    
    Agree about the testimonials too.
    
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Thanks @Jeddi!

We just re-did the design but think it is still a bit bare. Any ideas on how to come across are more trustworthy?

https://www.cryptotrader.tax/early-access/

Lucas Wyland

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  Add more CTA. CTA should be on a different color.
  
  Add social proof
  
  you need a logo on desktop /early-access
  
  Add live chat, asking if they want a demo or give a free guide on How To Reduce Taxes (Idk, you understand what I mean)
  
  Add exit pop-up giving away free stuff (e.g. guide) then retarget.
  
  “Having Trouble With Your Taxes?” looks better as a tagline.
  
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    Thank you!
    
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So timely. I upped my landing page yesterday. Would love to hear what you say. https://bugcrew.net, I built this specifically on my existing clients requests for me to have a page so that they can refer people to me. But I'm equally interested to get this across the wide audience and see if it resonates. So any feedback would be great.

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  Add CTA on each section. Add CTA on each pricing plan. You redirect to a typeform, we don’t care, add a different typeform per pricing plan, so you already have a segmentation)
  
  what’s BugBytes? There’s a broken link on your top bar
  
  Footer: if there’s no social media ATM, do not put social media links.
  
  Our Expertise section: when you click on a box, it becomes white ?? For a service selling website fixes, that’s bad.
  
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    Thank you. Added these to my checklist for update.
    
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Hey @jeddi, check this one out. HTTPS://www.kyleads.com

Thanks in advance for the feedback. I’m more concerned with the messaging BTW

Daniel Ndukwu

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  You’re selling a tool to make quizzes for lead gen:
  
  Replace the headline “Simple…" with the question just below “Are your current.." => follow the Simon Sinek “Why” Theory (Check on youtube)
  
  The screenshot is so ugly (sorry, I prefer to be totally honest) => would be better to replace it with a video showing your tool (max 1min)
  
  In general: bigger typo. I’m not blind (almost) but there’s too much white space.
  
  in the description area, there’s too many points. Remember one thing: 3 points maximum.
  
  Only 2 CTA. Add 1 CTA per section, so you should have at least 4 CTA.
  
  You’re selling a lead quizz magnet, but there’s no lead quizz magnet on your website. Mheeee
  
  Was checking your competitor online: https://www.leadquizzes.com => That’s a landing page!
  
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Sounds like a great idea @Jeddi! I own a website called failory.com and I have written an e-book people can download for free. Here is the landing page: failory.com/side-project - Looking forward your feedback!

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  Bigger CTA, x3-4. Add 1 more CTA on the bottom too.
  
  Why we should trust you? Who you’re to teach us how to build a side project? => Add trust (put your bio, with your track record (or ppl that you interviewed)
  
  Add exit pop up.
  
  Your page need more description (like: why I need to start a side project? Benefits?)
  
  Check Zero To Launch from Ramit Sethi
  
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    Thanks a lot!
    
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Context: I sell a compensation/sales suite to insurance agencies. They all require a demo prior to signing on.

https://www.visualbonus.com

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  Add faces on testimony
  
  Good Pricing page, but if they have to do a live demo, why they can already pay for it? Focus on only 1 thing: start free trial or live demo.
  
  Add live chat, asking if they want a 30min live demo for free (why for free? Because 30 min is expensive in a world like your target, so if you give it for free, damn that's a good deal) (use crisp.chat or something similar)
  
  Add exit pop-up, give away something for free (like: How To 3X Your Sales Thanks To Us) then retarget them with fb ads
  
  On the bottom, why you ask for a signup (live demo) and on the same page you have a Start Free Trial CTA? Confusing (same than your pricing page)
  
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  I understand your concept, would be a good idea to AB test with a "real" landing page (if you have enough traffic)
  
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