Full redesign of our landing page learning from the lessons of the community

Hi everybody,

We released our new landing page this week. Our product is yet not available, but this is our second landing page already. I posted here the previous version asking you for feedback (https://www.indiehackers.com/post/we-finally-launched-on-the-web-and-socials-what-do-you-think-d480093169).

The community helped us figure out what was wrong with our landing page. We have done some of the most common errors, the most important being:

1. Not having a clear goal for the user when visiting the page
2. Having too much written content that people will never read
3. Not structuring the flow of the website in order to give the most important information first and make the user interested to scroll down the page

So, we decided to redesign from scratch the landing page.
https://nuklex.com/

We focused our effort on making it as clean as possible and we introduced a clear CTA, with the goal of prompting people to subscribe to our pre-launch newsletter.

We are quite happy with the final result. Once again, we would love to hear your feedback on it. What do you think we missed again?