Gaining Life Time Customers

Hey y'all. I'm getting back into my newsletter of Request Startups. Start up ideas, Learn and Thrive your startups.
I just made a new post about Gaining Life Time Customers. I would love any feedback from y'all, so I can greatly improve my writing skills and my newsletter.
Thanks.

https://requeststartup.substack.com/p/gaining-life-time-customers