Gimme dat sweet sweet feedback

Following up on the comments below: I also feel the value that it brings is missing, or difficult to understand. It's a bit of a cliché but what could help is to think about how you would briefly and clearly explain the one biggest advantage to a potential user? Or to a 5 year old kid? If you get that clear and put it up top, front and center, visitors should be instantly engaged and interested to signup or to at least scroll down and read more.

Hey, Here is my quick feedback:

1. Consider adding some color to the CTA button
2. Input field doesn't need a drop shadow
3. Use one kind of way to show screenshots (now you have a mac + safari window)
4. The images don't really reveal how this tool can help me.
5. Each section should cover the whole screen. Right now everything is too close to each other.
6. More explanation of the business value would be useful.

Hey Jon,

I think you probably have something, but you need to explain it better.

For what I see in your landing, I see that I can automate calendar events. But I'm not sure why I would want this? Can I do it directly from google calendar?

It should be more clear what your product can do for me or any random visitor, and BENEFITS. Whats the benefit of using your app instead of just scheduling events with gcalendar?

"Introducing CalPal, the calendar bot", this does not explain how your service bring value to your visitors. Landing tagline has a very huge impact on whether your visitors would convert into users. It is often the only thing your visitors see on your website before deciding if they're leaving.

The first few lines don't give a good reason why I'd want to give up my email address... It wouldn't hurt to add some colour to your CTA too --