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GIVE ME ONE LINERS ABOUT WHAT MY PRODUCT IS

https://www.shopme.bio

GIVE ME YOUR ONE LINERS about what the product does based on what you can collect from my landing page. Most of the feedback I have gotten on this is from friends/ family who already had me explain the idea.

I am really not experienced with SEO, copywriting or creating landing pages that encourage sign ups. Any feedback in those areas would be super helpful.

I would also love to hear any feedback related to UI/UX if anyone wants to jump in and sign up!

on May 24, 2022
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    It's an affiliate something or other - but exactly what, I dunno.

    Maybe it's got some analytics, or maybe it is a one-size-fits-all card that people can click on to do what? Or why? I dunno.

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      Thanks for that! I’ve been trying to clear up my copy in that initial section and maybe put together like a gif or something

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    Hi Matt,

    I scrolled through your landing page and I was trying to collect some of the questions, thoughts that popped up in my head:

    • so is this an app that I can use to create an e-commerce site?
    • ok, it's not that, but an online catalogue of the tools / products / apps I use?
    • or it has nothing to do with what I use or like, but simply a collection of products?
    • it says "give your audience a custom e-commerce site", ok so maybe it's not just an online catalogue
    • (checking the live demo) I can't find a way to purchase these items here, I got redirected to different pages, so it's not an e-commerce site, I'm confused
    • what does supported brands mean? YouTube, Amazon, Squarespace? I can't see a correlation here
    • "Centralize everything", like what? Everything?

    UI/UX:

    • section icons (the ones with the green background) look the same as buttons, so I assumed that I can click on them and something will happen
    • links on the live demo should open in a new window so I can easily return to the collection to check out other stuff
    • the SIGN IN link on the top right doesn't look like a button or link, it's styled like text

    Other:

    • highlight the quote from Dj Lemón, and show his site as well as a real life example

    I think people who use affiliate links already know why they use them (to make money) so probably what you need to highlight is that with the help of you app they can organize these affiliate links much easier.

    I'm not good with headlines, but here are two examples:

    • The easiest way to organize your affiliate links and share it with your community / audience
    • The best way to show your community / audience the things you like and use

    Who is the target audience of your product? If you know that, it'll be easier to come up with a great headline. I think the quote from Dj Lemón can already help you with that.

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      This is great stuff! Thank you!

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    Hi Matt,

    Here is a link to feedback on your landing page!

    Shopme.bio Feedback

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      Awesome! Thanks clay!