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Grill my Landing Page. I like it well-done

Hey

My first micro site that I finished and published myself.
The idea came to me after I found out that my colleague had stolen my money via Paypal and I didn't noticed.

https://www.loginbait.com

  • What do you think about the site generally?
  • How do you get along with the information? Do you get a quick impression of what it's about?

Many thanks!

on February 24, 2023
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    Way too much text on the "how it works" section, give me a reason to read it. Or make a video :)

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      Good to hear. Not even considered that's too long.
      Thank you

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    Sorry if I sound too direct, but you've got a cool idea, so you deserve honesty.

    • "honeypots" - who is your audience? It might be worth defining "honeypots" or using a different word, unless you're only targeting people who already know this term.
    • "when someone tries to access your privacy" - what does this mean? I'm guessing you mean something like "invade your private life".
    • All text should be at least 16px and 500 font-weight. You need fewer font-sizes and consistent weights.
    • Cards with a hover effect that you can't click are distracting - they feel broken.
    • The copy could use some polishing. One example is "...a hacker or a person close to you somehow has access to your computer. Naturally, he rummages...". Replace "a hacker or a person close to you" with "someone" and "he rummages" with "they rummage". I'd recommend a copy writer to proofread / rewrite the copy.
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    You need to fix this FAQ query: "What Information is included in the Alert email regarding the suspected thief?"

    It's entry is:
    "We se"