Happiness is Free - Your feedback/opinion is appreciated. Thanks!
https://happinessisfree.life
Directly from the landing page>
Way too many people spend years of their life in the pursuit of Happiness. Only a few are aware that the Happiness we seek in life is within us.
This eBook and Course will teach you to internalize Happiness and not externalize it. The Power of Happiness is within you. Find it!
Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance for dropping one!
I see some design issues there. Do you want me to point few of those? Are you planning to improve that area?
I feel it could be a great landing page if you fix some design issues.
~Surjith
Sure. I'll be happy to get your feedback. I am more of a dev than a designer though, but I'll be happy to have them fixed. Thanks in advance!
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Found something reaving in the menu on scrolling, but feels like its cropped. Since its the main action, I don't see any need to hide that.
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Try to align the image and the content.
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Lot of blue links, but realized those are not links. it makes harder to read the actual text as its more grey.
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May be make one button in different color than blue?
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Is this an easter egg ? Feels like a color option given by the template you've used.
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Those grey BG and top are supposed to be circle right? Seems bottom icon is circled but top is like an Egg Shaped.
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Lot of blank space here, may be try few variations with Typography Sizing and also work on padding.
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a) It will be great if the buttons aligned in same line.
b) An odd space in the right part.
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Too much spacing.
And some minor adjustments will make it a great landing page.
Wow. Awesome!
Thanks for your concise feedback.
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3.✓ I'll remove those blue colored texts. What color would you suggest instead of grey?
4.✓ Maybe the other one pink?
5.✓ Easter egg 🥚
6.✓ Should be Circles. It's because I added an additional icon to the ones at the top. I'll have it fixed.
7.✓ Nice suggestion!
8.✓ True that!
9.✓ I'll have it fixed.
Thanks!