Happy Halloween! Your landing page is scaring away potential customers. Let's roast it.
Your landing page is more important than you think it is.
Think of it as a digital doorstep.
Would you become a customer of a business with a crappy or vague doorstep?
Probably not.
But I'm here to help.
In the spirit of the holiday, I'll be roasting landing pages.
Simply post a link to your landing page below, and I'll tell you what's wrong with it.
(p.s. if you don't want to wait, you can try out LookPro (https://lookpro.org)
Hey Henry,
Thanks for the opportunity!
I am launching Jingle Bio (https://jingle.bio) this Friday, It would be amazing if you could provide feedback on our landing page so we can make improvements before the launch.
Thanks again!
Luo
Hey Luo,
This is a solid landing page. Clear value prop, a differentiator from competition, and solid CTA.
You only have 14 issues (see https://lookpro.org/)