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Happy to receive feedback about my landing page

by Omar Ben.
https://odown.io
Omar Ben.'s avatarOmar Ben.
submitted this linkon May 21, 2021
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    I really like your landing page haha. It has a super clear value proposition with no marketing fluff.

    SymbolOfFlight's avatar SymbolOfFlight
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    5 years ago
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      Thank you @SymbolOfFlight for your feedback ;)

      Omar Ben.'s avatar Omar Ben.
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      5 years ago
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    A few thoughts:

    • change the status page img on mouse over rather than on click. Somehow it took me a while to understand that I should click it. Also maybe the headline could be (What you see / What they see)
    • some extra spaces between sections, always, it makes you focus on each block individually rather than occupy your entire view with all of them.
    • maybe move the "get alerted" directly under the hero. but only if that is more important to the user. Honestly, for me that something I like more than the other features which are "nice to have". Or maybe add a features item with "get alerted" and have the 4 types of notifications in a single image, 4 bubbles hovering over a laptop with a phone next to it

    Nice job tho! Good luck ;)

    gidea's avatar gidea
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    5 years ago
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      Thank you very much for your thoughts, and I will take into account everything you recommended as a change.

      Sometimes I assume some things are obvious to the user, but they aren't, which is why your feedback is so valuable to me ;)

      Omar Ben.'s avatar Omar Ben.
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      5 years ago
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