Healthy.Codes Coming Soon Page Feedback (Works or not?)
Hey Indie Hackers,
I am curious that does my coming soon page convey the right message about the product? --> https://healthy.codes
Could you please briefly comment what kind of image appears in your mind after reading landing page? So, I can adjust the design/content in a way it conveys the correct one.
Also any feedback, command, question (on either product or the page) are extremely welcomed.
https://healthy.codes
Cheers,
Hello!
Looks good! https://bit.ly/40BYMxy
Hey looks good! In the future or if you're ever looking for some in-depth designer quality feedback on your designs I'd love to help you out! I recently started a design feedback website called Pastryy, we can provide designer quality feedback on your logos, websites and mobile app designs.
You can check us out here: www.Pastryy.com
Here's a sample of our feedback as well:
https://www.notion.so/saucedesigns/Ugenly-Feedback-a7639dc9016b4aa084a2831762aed34d
Hey @AJPicard913 I will definitely check out your service when I launch the product. Thanks!
Awesome! Let me know if you have any questions.
Minor Feedback for Pastrry. Apply a overflow-x: hidden on the body otherwise have to use flex correctly. You have a horizontal bar on Chrome.
Thank you applying this now!
Cool idea! So you will review my landing page and give me a feedback like the sample you provided for $3?! That's way too low, you should consider raising your prices!
That's correct @andreboso right now the price is low so I can show potential customers what I can do, in hopes they transfer to the individual plan after they see the quality of the feedback we're providing. Once I build out the community a little more I will be raising the prices!
Hi,
I dont come from a coding background, but from what i understand, through the wording from the website you are telling more about your features rather than what you are trying to solve.
A Good content can easily convert a potential customer.
From a Design Perspective, your page needs quite a bit of refinement, especially with the typography and the visual hierarchy.
I suggest you to go through this link so that you can understand what i am trying to convey.
( Content + Design ). https://www.landingfolio.com/gallery/business/sumithegde-2/
Wishing you best!
Cheers,
Veena
Hi @VeenaSreedhar, that's a very good point (I think I missed it while creating the page); telling what the product solves should be visible earlier than the features. I will try to switch order from feature->solution to solution->feature. Very good point. The design needs couple of improvements, as all the comments pointed it out. Thank you for your time and feedback, cheers!
First impression is that the product is an application monitor. I also agree with @Coderforlife22 in that the font-weight for the text is way too light.
To answer your question about being interested in the product: App monitoring is often crucial for businesses. Your health reports will only be as good as the uptime of your monitoring service. In other words, I'm trusting you to keep your monitoring service working otherwise my product could be impacted, and I wouldn't know because the monitoring service doesn't monitor itself. Therefore, it makes more sense for me to use established monitoring services that I can trust to be online (think of 99.99% SLAs).
I would think about how I could build trust in my service ("I can guarantee 99% uptime"), and of course, build word of mouth referrals. Best of luck @bakayim :)
@jarrad_obrien Wow, featuring my uptime percent wouldn't come to my mind! That's a great feedback for me. I will definitely mention it in the website. Luckily, I built the system that can guarantee excellent uptime percentages, so it won't be hard to advertise! :)
Thank you for your time and feedback, how much would you be interested such a product out of [1-10]? (I am asking because I am trying to validate the idea, if people would pay for it or not)
I just started working in an infrastructure role, so that's the context I'm coming from in giving feedback.
Personally, I haven't gotten to the "need to monitor my apps, because I have real customers" stage, but I can say that app monitoring is a thing that is being used right now and is paid for. The idea is already validated.
Most important things I would consider would be guaranteed uptime of monitoring service, how easy it is to integrate with my app, the ease of use of the UI, and reviews of it.
@jarrad_obrien Very appreciated your feedbacks man, thanks for your time again. Good luck with your product by the way
#1. Way too much text. You should use that text as copy for the rest of the page instead of one giant paragraph as soon as you land on the page. I already lost interest without even reading. Consider changing all that text into a hero. Check out https://saaspages.xyz/ for ideas.
The rest isn't bad but the font looks a bit thin and tiny to read. Maybe try using a higher font weight.
Also reconsider the copy on the page. It does convey the point but it doesn't take so much text to convey the message.
Nice idea though!
Hey @Coderforlife22
Thank you so much for your time and feedbacks. I definitely agree with you about the paragraph after reading your comment. I will update that part asap. Font size and text length will be re-adjusted, I took my notes.
My last question to you is, how much would you be interested such a product out of [1-10]? (I am asking because I saw that you are also developing your own project )
Thank you again for your time and feedback, cheers!
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