Hey IHers! I'm launching a MVP of Dingo, a Slack app for healthy work habits.
I've been struggling to write clear and concise language for the landing page. I find myself either describing how the app works (boring and not persuasive) or some overly optimistic business-y platitude ("increases synergistic collaboration!").
If you have a few moments I'd love feedback on which words, phrases and images are most effective to you.