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Help me improve this mess of a landing page

Hey all, I would appreciate all your thoughts on how to improve my current landing page (currently in rough-draft form). Specific recommendations are appreciated. Thanks!

http://unbouncepages.com/codernotes/

on January 23, 2020
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    Getting this error: "The requested URL was not found on this server."

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      Thanks for the catch! It's up now

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    My biggest tip would be to switch to another website builder, the best for landing pages (imho) is Carrd.co!

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    The pitch is too vague for me. I don't understand if this product is going to provide notes for me to help me learn or a tool for me to write notes in.

    I would like to see a case study. For example, use a course from someone like Wes Bos and show me some screenshots or a video of how this tool is going to help.

    Also, the "Learn Faster" button doesn't do anything for me (Tried desktop firefox and chrome).

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      Thanks for your reply! I'm working off of a different provider now, landen.co instead of unbounce.com. Will submit that one when ready!

      Also, thanks for saying that it is too vague - that's a great point and I'll need to think deeply about how to show the value in a single-page, especially when the UI isn't ready yet

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    Other than having to scroll right to see the rest of the page via mobile it looks nice. Before Fixing this, I found it unique if the image hints to more on the right vs completely cut off it would be a nice swipe right experience and actually stands out.

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    Couple of things I noticed as a visitor

    1. Image height is much more than content, requires unnecessary scroll.
    2. Second section, the one below image), I would put text on left and image on right (you want visitor to read text first, I assume.
    3. Third section, align icons to center

    If I have a choice, I would use other template.
    You can try Draftium -- online website prototyping, editor (https://draftium.com/#sample-prototypes), for layout/inspiration.
    I am not related to Draftium, just making a suggestion

    Cheer,
    Dhan.

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      Thanks for this, I agree now that I have some space from it... the template sucks. Thanks for catching me!

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      Sorry about that! Up now :)