Help me review this landing page about a travel community.
Hello,
I just finished doing this simple lead generation landing page. My idea is to have people join the telegram group and subscribe using their email. Help me look at its copy, layout etc. Any feedback is highly welcome. http://busman.kickoffpages.com/
It's unclear to me what this club is about. I understand it has something to do with the travel industry, but I'm not seeing who it's really for or what it allows you to do.
Thank you. I had not noticed this error myself. Let me try and get better copy then I can post again.