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Help Roast My Dino-Themed Coming Soon Page so Hard it Goes Extinct!

by vintually

I'm working on the internet's thesaurus of brands aka:
https://www.brandesaurus.com/

The current coming soon page hasn't been getting too many email submissions even though I've been able to drive some targeted traffic (marketers, designers, entrepreneurs).

SO

Any feedback, critiques, ideas, or comments on how to make the coming soon page more engaging would be greatly appreciated!

vintually's avatarvintually
on February 10, 2023
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    Very cool website and concept. I think you're off to an awesome start. Just some random feedback, feel free to disregard:

    • "Brandesaurus" header should be bold to respect hierarchy.
    • It's better to have two email sign up inputs than the text at bottom directing back to the first one.
    • Use off-white and off-black colors instead of #ffffff and #000000.
    • Line height looks a little too big for your headers and body text.
    • Submit button could be full width on mobile.
    • Sign up form background color should be different from the body background color to distinguish it as a CTA.

    Good luck!

    michaelsynan's avatar michaelsynan
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      Awesome feedback! Thank you so much!

      Quick question:

      How'd you feel about the text that explained the website and the mini-brand analysis?

      vintually's avatar vintually
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        It's great but a more catchy hook point might help. I'd say something like:

        "Brand analysis in bite size chunks for your favorite - and not so favorite - companies. Logos, typography, and color palettes, oh my!"

        "The ULTIMATE resource for brand analysis and company research."

        "On a mission to catalog the building blocks of every brand, current and past."

        Hope that helps! This is just for the site description, can look at brand analysis later

        michaelsynan's avatar michaelsynan
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          AWESOME!!!! Thank you bunches!

          Also excited you understand the intended use case!

          Thank you again for the help!

          vintually's avatar vintually
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    Happy to, if you need a good roasting you can check out roastd.io 🔥

    designaas's avatar designaas
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