Help with reaching our target audience / landing page feedback requested
Fellow hackers, my co founder and I have thought of a way to deliver web sites in a fairly fast and affordable way and we want to test his idea.
Our ideal audiences new or small business whose online presence is currently limited to Facebook or something similar.
We have discovered that the main options for these businesses is to either learn to do their website themselves on a platform like wix etc. which often ends up looking very um, homemade, or to hire an agency (expensive!) or solution is to offer something that lands between these two alternatives.
In order to test this idea, price point etc we put together a quick landing page (pre-launch). I would like to get feedback on this page. What could I improve on it: https://hype.mobilefirst.me/
Secondly we are very low budget at the moment, so I’m looking for good ideas on how to get this in front of people who might be in the right target audience (not ads). We have posted to some fb groups and subreddits already but probably haven’t found the exact best place because we are getting very few actual views.
(Sorry for any typos wrote this in a phone)
I liked the concept , however..I thought your landing page would show me
I would also like to add...
I hate visiting a website not seeing anything..but then they want me to subscribe...this tells me ( right or wrong ) they are not ready for business..they are just collecting emails .
At last but not least...GET RID OF THE PINK
Places to submit your site .
https://www.viralsweep.com/blog/sites-to-submit-your-products-to
I agree - the landing page is missing some key information. There's not much information at all except for a price. If you are going to slap a $500 price on your landing page and ask for people to subscribe right away, I think some more information/context is needed. The suggestions that @SUPERViLLAiN gave you are good ones (examples of work, skill set, what's unique about you, etc)
To begin with, I agree with what SUPERViLLAin said.
Once you polish your site and your funnel, here are some guerrilla marketing tactics you can try for free traffic:
1- Go around local shops and give out flyers / talk to the owners .
2- Find facebook pages for small businesses (like family owned businesses) and personally reach out to them.