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Hey guys, we very be super grateful if we can get some feedback for our landing page built on no-code!

by Maxwellzhou

Hi guys:

My name is Max, and I am a 17-year-old entrepreneur who loves to create products that can help society.

Since I started this business journey, I found it hard to find a business learning platform where I can learn courses from every industry, talk to mentors and network with like-minded people.

Therefore I made this website for all the ambitious people to achieve success by learning about any business industry & building a network by talking to successful mentors and like-minded people. Also, I feel like mentors are not getting the reward they deserve due to the high commission other platforms charge. I want to offer a lower commission learning platform and help all mentors build their brands to unlock more opportunities

Here is the URL of my website (https://enbitious.com/), currently, I am trying to validate the idea using this landing page, tell us what you think about the visual, delivery and how can I optimise it more so I am the business idea can be clear and truly validate the product! Thanks a lot!

Maxwellzhou's avatarMaxwellzhou
on December 4, 2021
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    Landing-page wise I think you put a lot of thought in the different sections already, I think the structure is pretty decent (hero section- problems with existing solutions & solution- features / USP - CTA).

    Some minor points:

    • your hero section is where people spend the most time judge their initial impression on, I think it could use some more thought on the copy-text ("Best" is just a subjective claim, "achieve business success" leads me to ask in what regard, "real results" doesn't tell me enough about what the outcome can be for me). Styling wise it's also a bit generic but I'm not sure how easy it is to come up with something nicer on Bubble.
    • I feel like your icons are all over the place, maybe you can find a somewhat consistent set of icons instead of the mix&match that is going on in your problem & solution section

    Some conceptual points from reading your offering:

    • I think what you're offering could be somewhat more distinctive -> "all the top quality course from every industry" is a very broad promise, I don't think that's anywhere close to a unique selling point -> maybe consider a niche that is not saturated with course/ mentoring offers yet?
    • Who's your target customer? Learning business is pretty generic, are you going for a Udemy-level audience? Masterclass? Young Professionals? Students? Seasoned professionals trying to branch out? I think narrowing down can help adress potential customers more specifically instead of superficially addressing everyone.
    • I partly understood how you plan on delivering that value, but there's a lot going on in your value proposition: courses, programs, 1o1 mentoring, groups, chats, etc. (and all that for a lower commission fee than existing platforms!) I know you're throwing a lot of ideas out there cuz you're in validation, but I think there's the risk that you're gonna get a lot of luke-warm commitment like "yeah better course platform for less money sounds nice". Not sure how to deal with that though.

    Hope that gives you some ideas, pretty nice that you already have a creator-mindset at that age, good luck with your project!

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      Thanks so much, I will definitely fix those, thanks for your advice!

      Maxwellzhou's avatar Maxwellzhou
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