Hey y'all, I'm looking for early feedback (will repay the favor)
Hey y'all,
I've recently launched Bolty. I'm hoping to get some early feedback on my landing page, as I'm hoping to begin taking on beta users.
- Am I communicating value effectively?
- What would make you want to try (that's missing)?
- Any other general feedback?
Drop your link below if you'd like my feedback on your site!
Hi, Bryce,
I saw Bolty.
I understand what Bolty is: a service where SEO websites are roasted.
I guess (for me) I would be interested to see how it works.
Does it cover On Page SEO, Off-Page SEO, Tech SEO, or is it general suggestions?
This is my input for the site.
Hi! Thanks for the feedback!
I need to incorporate this into the copy. Bolty began as a SEO scanning service, and then it pivoted when I had a landing page (for roasting) start to convert. It scans for On Page SEO blockers (15 distinct items that were necessary for one of my other sites to begin indexing on google).
However, the SEO scanner (while effective) wasn't converting very well, but the "roast" feature, is/was converting.
A few features of Bolty:
Gotcha,
When you have a solid brand for Bolty, feel free to reach me at growthmarketgigs@gmail.com.
If you are thinking about bringing in a landing page video, I can write you a free landing page script for Bolty.
Hi @Bryce_Murray , I have a website Userdome for sharing feedback on products among founders. It may be interesting for you. We do a cross-feedback, you help other founders, they help you. Check it out, and let me know if you're interested.
Hey there! Congrats on launching Bolty. However your website does have a few issues.
Your content isn't optimized or well written- I want to be able to clearly understand what your product does in quick glance, I don't want to read a bunch of text. While it might be a really useful tool, I don't understand how this helps me. You need better visuals and maybe examples in a scenario which demonstrates the role of this tool.
If your website itself doesn't do what your tool is supposed to help others do, what does that say about your tool? SO:
I'm offering to design your website in Webflow absolutely FREE . This is only for the first 5 amazing people who jump on this opportunity.
Why am I doing this? Well, I've just started my own design agency, and I'm on a mission to build an incredible network and portfolio that showcases our skills. All I'm asking in return is your honest feedback, and if you like the work I do, a testimonial for my agency.
I promise to make your website not only look fantastic, but also be user-friendly and optimized for success. Let's work together and create something truly amazing that'll help your project thrive!
If you're interested, just shoot me a message, and let's make some magic happen!
No, I don't understand anything about your product by reading your heading. "Boost Your Website's Visibility and Outperform Your Competitors" sounds like a generic sales pitch. The subheading "It's simple, just submit your sitemap" also tells me nothing about what the product does.
I can't answer this, the product isn't relevant to me.
My guess is users would be less excited by the technology behind the scenes than you are. Your landing page mentions it's made with AI ten times. So what? I'd focus more on what your users are getting.
Hope that helps, good luck!