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Home Not Converting - Hungry For Feedback

Hey, guys, I created this home https://pirsonal.com and it's not converting really well. It's a SaaS product, for marketers, agencies, and customer experience people. Can you share any thoughts on what you would improve?

I recently added the free trial option and I'm getting more leads, but even then it's quite low.

I'm also using another lead magnet, which is a form that users can submit to create a demo that is sent to them by email. This one gets fewer leads but still gets something (1 out of 5).

I also added an exit-intent tool that leads the user to the free-trial. I'm thinking about changing this one for a checklist PDF. People that visit the site may be doing research and not ready to try or buy, I think.

What are your thoughts?

Thanks in advance!

on October 6, 2020
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    You seem to promise so many things at once (I got a sense you're mostly focused on video marketing). I'm seeing a lot of abstract language (but nothing concrete, not a demonstration on how the product is going to help me with anything etc.) I'd recommend you start specific, this current landing page talks to 10 different pain points.

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      Thank you!!! This makes a lot of sense. I'll review it and also will check surveys I've done to see how leads express themselves about my offering. Thank you!!!