Hello,
We recently redesigned our homepage (www.onset.io) and would love some feedback.
I would love to hear your thoughts. :)
About the design: it's great, I loved it! (I'm a web developer and see a lot of sites daily)
I also like the product a lot, features, etc. I've bookmarked the website
One thing that may help, but I don't know if it's just me:
At first when I saw the above the fold section, with "Keep everyone aligned and up to date" and the small paragraph, I thought the product was some sort of Slack alternative.
Only with the features right below the (giant) image I realized what your product was about, at this line: "Update your users on what's important to them with the right notification at the right time."
So I would think about finding some different wording for the very first title: "Keep everyone aligned and up to date", which seems too generic
Part of me thinks that using first this same string: "Simplify your product communication with Onset" as the main/first title would be an improvement, and more clear
But I don't know, maybe your target market will understand immediately with the current title
(even though I have a couple of side projects/products so I could be one of your users :D)
Another note about the main product image right below the first title and paragraph: When I first saw it, I didn't understand completely the product (I was still thinking it was some sort of Slack alternative)
Matt,
Thank you so much for your feedback. I agree with you on the main header being too generic and vague. I did worry that the platform's purpose wasn't as clear from the jump.
I will come up with a few new titles and report back.
Also, whenever you decide to sign up for Onset, please DM me so I can send you a promo code :)
Hello Sonny! I carefully scrolled through your site. Below you can see what I noticed.
General
Technical
Overall I like the app you are making. I looked at your product hunt page and saw that this had its first version in 2017. Glad you are back on it, gave you an up vote. If you want me to revisit your site after you made some changes feel free to contact me, I happily review sites.
Tömő!!
Holy moly, this is very thorough and valuable feedback! I appreciate it.
I will work on all of those and report back.
Also, regarding the image on the signup/login pages lol, you're correct. It makes no sense. I hated it from the get-go and never got a chance to remove it. I think it's time to work on it.
Thank you again!