How can I improve this landing page?
Hello, I've recently joined IndieHackers! I would appreciate any tips for making Shreddo's landing page easier to understand. It currently looks like this: https://shreddo.io/
Also, I am considering to change the one-liner at the top to: "Create and search for workflows for recurring tasks." Which one would you prefer?
https://github.com/michael-andreuzza/Free-Bulma-Templates/tree/master/templates
I have some free Bulma templates 100% responsive if you need to. There's landing pages too.
They are free
Hey, very nice templates! Starred and will definitely try, thank you.
Thank you o much karem. Use them whenever you need and want to.
I'll be honest with the feeedback.
I agree with @YannickVeys, I tried to click the input field. The images should not blend with the html background, image should look like a separate entity. Do something about it.
The page needs a better design, use templates as it'll help you being organized with sections and the overall structure of the page
The whole idea of landing page design is to attain higher sales funnel, but in order to do that the users need to understand the flow of it. The flow is completely broken right now.
The alignment and placing seems mismatch to me.
Using "Features" in the last? No that's not right, because the users need to see the features before they buy your idea. Put it somewhere in the top.
Hey, thanks for the honest feedback. I will definitely incorporate these changes in the next update on the landing page.
Your heading should be bigger. Didnt see it.
More spacing between the steps.
I tried to click on the input field: Enter workflow here
I wouldn't show the app so soon. I'd focus on: What problems am I solving for you. Don't go to your solutions just yet.
Hello Yannick! I feared that it looked like a clickable field, and you just confirmed my suspicion 😅. Thank you for the feedback.
I will be very candid.
@ me when you have made the changes and I will look at the copywriting.
P.S. I built https://saaspages.xyz/ so you can get advice from there
Hey! Thanks for the feedback and useful resources. -And thanks for being candid.
I will contact you once I've made the changes!
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Hello agota, thank you for your constructive feedback especially on the sales funnel and the copy. I will post an update to my landing page on IndieHackers after I address these issues.