How can my landing page be better?

seems like standard copy from similar commercial offers,
Would would be objections/concerns non-profits
For example in my head, personal time is scarce, I'd look at this and think, na, that's not a good use of my people resources
And also think the only time dones hit my website is after I already converted them in person and such, it's not like normal sales that the website is the sales channel.. at least most non profits in my mind don't do real internet marketing that's unattached to their actual live activites