I just finished my product MVP and now I'm not working to get some sales meetings. So wrote this email to send some users who joined my waitlist.
This is the email I wrote π https://mem.ai/p/3jeTQaYvCdVG36EnPL9p
Don't have much experience with cold email or sales in general. So I would love to get your feedback. Is it ok? Is it bad? something I can improve?
Also, I'm curious how do you normally ask people for such meetings?
Hey Arif,
So just to clarify you're sending an email out to people who joined your waiting list... and now it's time to show them a demo? Is that correct?
I've just tweaked it slightly.
Subject: Thanks for your patience.
Hi {name} π,
Last month I launched a landing page to do some demand testing for this idea & surprisingly some of you actually joined the waitlist! Which really pushed me to launch the MVP as soon as possible. For that, I'm truly thankful to you. π
Now I'm happy to announce that our MVP is finally ready! π and I can't wait to show you what we have so far. If you're still interested in seeing what I've done then it would be great to catch up for a 20min demo to get your valuable feedback.
To book your demo go here: https://calendly.com/devarifhossain/30min
Thanks for being patient and I look forward to sharing what we've done.
Arif Hossain,
Thanks for the changes, Your subject also seems appealing.
I thought giving users options to choose other than meeting would be a nice touch.. but guess most people don't care about that. π
your email script looks fine to me however i don't have any idea about sales either. Let me know how it goes.
okay sure
I actually like your email, I would probably schedule a meeting.
The only problem I see is it going to Updates tab and me not seeing it.
Lemlist has something called lemwarm that warms your email with real interactions so that you end up in inbox. I would probably advise on warming up your email for at least a week or two. And sending them when you see most of your emails go straight to the inbox.
When I really want to talk to someone I add them on linkedin, start a small talk, then ask them for a 15min meeting. It's just straight forward, and people are more responsive.
Good luck, and by the way, I like your site and thanks for introducing me to tally forms π
Thanks a lot for the feedback.. I will look into lemwarm for sure.
And yeap Tally Forms is great. definitely one of my favorite software.