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How is Festivo's new landing page?

http://getfestivo.com

Hello everyone 👋🏻

I recently published Festivo's landing page at getfestivo.com and wanted to get everyone's opinion.

I appreciate any tips, critiques, and advice that anyone has!

I've recently pivoted from its previous name (holidayapi.pl) due to suspect of traffic loss on behalf of competition.

Thanks in advance 😁

#landing-page-feedback

submitted this linkon July 5, 2019
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    "With Festivo you can serve better experience to their customers and employees in marketing, sales, shipping and support software."

    Doesn't make sense grammatically :(

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      Right in the spot! Leftovers of the rebranding process, apparently missed that part when changing the name and parts of copy. Thank you!

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    I really liked the "give it a try" section, it's very direct and shows me right away what the service does and how it does it.
    That's a good thing, because I could not understand what the service was just by quickly reading the copy, specially the part "...serve better experience to their customers..." whose customers are you talking about? You could maybe improve the text to more directly say what the service does.

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    Nice landing page with a clear message right from the cover. Here's some thoughts on the design:

    • Your logo in navbar is large so it lost alignment with the right side.
    • It might be nice to reduce the vertical padding of navbar and add a subtle shadow so it would have a elevation/contrast with your content after scroll.
    • I couldn't get the point of using that background-image for your cover.
    • Once you open the page, there're 4 buttons (call to actions). I'd say reduce awareness of "Try Again" and "Signup with GitHub" buttons.
    • It might look better if you align the left-side content of your footer bottom-aligned.
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    Hey Szymon, congrats on publishing it, some thoughts from taking a look at your landing page:

    • I'm not completely sold with the ornament background in the header, I think it might collide with the readability, specifically for paragraph text under the H1.

    • Buttons on the site ,have different hover effects (underline, color background change, no hover effect etc.) and could give less coherent and confusing experience for some users.

    • 4th illustration (Marketing 2.0) is inconsistent in color palette, with the rest of the illustrations in the group.

    • Footer has a quiet weird layout, having no content in the center (where the users eye sight would be expecting content)

    Just five cents from me, hope it helps and good luck with your product!

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      thanks for your insight! definitely gonna check out those buttons and footer and fix the colors on the illustration, what kind of background would you suggest? I put it there to make it look more "energetic", tried solid color before and looked pretty boring

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    Love that you rebranded. Would definitely be awesome if you'd stop liftng my copy every week though ;)

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      Who’s lifting who’s copy Josh. Give it a break, as you can see on Festivo’s stats, I’m not the one “stealing” your traffic and revenue ;) hope you have a nice feedback using Drift, nice tool