How is my landing page?
Hey awesome people of IH. Would love to hear what you guys think about this page: https://pipfeed.com/
I have been working really hard on this for the last 4 days. Please please let me know how can I improve this. Is the message clear? Should I change somethings in this?
Hey, this page is really good!
My only suggestion might be to think about what kind of articles people don't want to see, and make it a selling point that Pipfeed filters them out.
The broader question is "How will my content consumption experience be different (and better) if I use Pipfeed?" ... and this is just a specific facet.
It's hard for me to visualize "Finding better articles" but if you tell me "Pipfeed will spare you from sensationalistic clickbait headlines" I can easily imagine the absence of something already familiar. (And annoying)
IDK if that makes sense at all, but it might be worth asking some of your happy users how things would be different if they couldn't use Pipfeed, and see if they mention anything like this.
Oh! One more thing - I didn't see anything on the page about how Pipfeed makes money. Before clicking through to the app store, I'd want to know whether there are ads, or a subscription fee.
☝️ Sharing this info prominently on the LP won't necessarily increase your conversion rate so proceed with caution ⚠️