How to create a good landing page?

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Hi Indie Hackers,
For an assignment, I had to create a landing page and I'm curious what you think about it! (text is in dutch though) What should you do differently? Thanks! This is the link to my landing page: http://bit.ly/2VkuygF

Kind regards, Raoul

Raoul Valstar

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Looks good. Loads really slow tho, and the CTA is not very clear. :)

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  Thank you for your feedback! I've created a new page: http://bit.ly/2LKU27o
  
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