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Your design is BEAUTIFUL. But your copy is confusing. Have you considered hiring a copywriter? Also, this might be a copy issue too but what does stoicism have to do with design? If there is a connection, I’d love to know what it is! Congrats and can’t wait to see you get better!
Hey, thank you so much for the comment! Definitely appreciate the feedback!
Design and stoicism are just my 2 passions of mine I guess, there isn't that much connection between them. I could definitely hire a copywriter, that doesn't seem like a bad idea. But, what part did you found unclear on the website? Would love to know :)
Let’s take it from the top:
design stoic — sets the expectation that I’m about to receive advice, probably related to design
Creative Factory — oh no, it’s a creative factory...what’s a creative factory?
Creating Better Brands, — ah it’s a branding agency...
One Design Subscription at a Time. — it’s a design subscription? Why is subscription bolded?
The CTAS seem to be go up or login, not see plans or pricing or something that moves a potential customer forward.
Can you see the confusion?
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Very simple and clear