🚀 How to get feedback for my new landing page? Day #1

Hi! I collected a few comments that I hope will help you to improve your landing page 💪

1. I would like to see a more detailed description of the product. What kind of features does it have? You might consider adding a demo video to the landing page to grab people's attention visually.
2. In the header, I would focus on your value proposition or on stating the problem that you are solving. I don't know what loopCard is, so the slogan "Create Engaging Products with loopCard" doesn't tell me much. I expected to know more after reading the description: "Boost your customer engagement & retention by adding loopCard.", but again - what does loopCard do exactly? Just cut the fluff and say clearly what you are selling.
3. Does this product already exist, or are you just trying to capture interest? I noticed that after clicking "Sign up" from the Pricing page, it says that the card details are not required. Does it mean that there is a trial, or do you just reach out to everyone personally after they sign up? I would suggest removing barriers and giving instant access to the product (if it has been built). Instead of using "Sing up" as a CTA, change it to something like "Start now", "Try now", etc. and make people create an account.
4. You have a Use Cases section on the page but no content. Either describe in detail each use-case or hide it from the navigation for now.
5. If you claim that you have 5000+ members, it might be a good idea to get a few testimonials to show on the page. Case studies with real customers would be also nice to create trust.

There needs to be much more of an explanation of what the product is and how it works. What is LoopCard? How does it fit in with my business? What does it actually look like? You need to persuade me that signing up is worth my time first, not the other way around.

Some of the content on the "About Us" page is better. "loopCard is on a mission to help developers build more engaging products using wallet passes that create a beautiful customer journey and next level loyalty." And the graphic with the message and push notification. Ah, so it's about wallet passes! Bring this over to the landing page, and expand on it.

Additionally, could do with some more attention to detail. Things like inconsistent capitalization of "LoopCard", a "coming soon" plan that is somehow also the "most popular", the graphic with a dollar amount containing two decimal points ($26,352.48.73).

Hi,

For me, there is no answer to the main question: What exactly is and how does it work? Before starting the Trial or booking the demo, I would like a detailed explanation and good cases. I want to begin to want what you sell first.