How would you improve my landing page?
Yesterday I’ve finished the first version of my project’s landing page.
I’ve spent a good amount of time on it and am pretty satisfied with the result, but I am just learning these whole online marketing thing and I’d love to see your opinion and feedback:
Thanks you!
Hello, I see others already pointed out the similar thing, but I'll write it as well.
Way too much text for my taste. Then I saw this "We believe that the less is more" and it didn't convince me.
Hello, thanks for the feedback! How much would be ok? Half or even less?
Not sure exactly, but I would go with minimal text on the landing page, and to express it more with visuals. Collaboration tools reminds me of some people grouping together to visualise their thoughts, draw some shapes so they can be sure others understood. They won't usually get together to share a lot of text. Maybe the landing page could be made to represent how you would explain your idea in colaborative way.
Another thing, stating in headline that is "easy to use on any device" is having a low impact. Consider avoiding things such as "easy to use, simple to use, something new, different way" etc. I hope you get my point. Instead put the particular reasons why it is easy to use on any device and let the visitors decide. Provide some "evidences" that it plays well across 3+ different devices for example.
Thanks!
Super intriguing product @rideg.
I see that you want to make minimalism one of the differential factors. I would go in this visual direction also on your landing. If Less is more in your product it should reflect in your presentation.
Here are a couple of examples for your inspiration. (key takeaways: white space, less text)
https://www.starshiphsa.com
https://www.primer.com
https://swach.io/
Good luck!
Thanks! You’re probably right. Ill try to redesign or get it redesigned.
I'd love to see a short video (30 seconds or something) about how it works because it looks kinda cool.
Hi @rideg,
I like the idea and you have cool name too.
The website gives me a basic understanding of what you are doing, it would be great to see some examples so users can relate to.
You have a reasonably good explanation, it looks like you haven't spent much time on the visual aspect of your website. I suggest you polish it a bit more.
All the best.
Thanks for checking the page out and for taking the time to respond!
Can you be a bit more specific?